Sunday, August 12, 2012

My ode to my cellphone, Nori!



Dear my cellphone, Nori .


Hi Nori.I’m Lina.

To start with you, I want to say sorry to you. I always threw you anywhere. Sometimes, I dropped you into a cold water. I think you were very cold. Also, yesterday, I broke your friend, battery. I’m really sorry abou that. I used you for my satisfying resentment. From now on, I’ll think of you as my valuable treasure.

It’s only few months to stay with you. I need to change you with a smartphone. I will miss you. You were my first phone. For the past, 1 and half years to be with you, it was really good. When I didn’t have a phone, I saw you. I fell in love with your pink and slim style. Therefore, I persuade my father to buy you. Because of my strong persistence, my father finally bought you. I was really happy as I fly to the sky when I got you.

 Sometimes, I envy you. You don’t need to study hard and do a lot of assignment. Also, you can change your face for anytype.


I think I can’t forget you forever, my first phone, Nori.
I LOVE YOU and bye~ :)


                                                                                                                From your friend Lina Lim.

3 comments:

  1. This is a good ode but try to describe the phone more and personify it. When you write a letter, skip a line after Dear my cellphone.

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  2. It's pretty interesting that you named your phone. What a lovely phone!

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