Hello everyone. I'm
Lina. Yesterday, I watched video called "Spring" by Kim Ki Dok in Ms. Angela's
class. A monk saw the little monk tried the animals. with rocks and played with
them. Therefore, the monk tied the little monk when he Monk slept. Monk said he
would release little monk when he released the animals which he played with.
However, some animals were already dead. The little monk cried and regreted him.
In this video, I knew lots of thongs. I could regreted my life
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Part2
First, in this video, the little monk played with animals. He
didn't understand animals mind. When I watched that video, I could remember a
time when I acted like little monk. When I was 7 years old. When I was that age,
I liked to step on them because, they were really small. In the video, little
monk like to play with their lives like me when I was 7 years old. After the
little monk killed them. He cried and he regret his actions. Now, I can
understand the ants mind. Now, I’m really sorry to the ants. I want to go back
to that period and save the ants. If I see small animals such as ants, I will
not kill them and always regret my past
actions.
Second, in the
video, the monk tried to teach the little monk what is right and what is wrong.
When I was watching monks act, I could regret my life when my baby sister born.
I was really mad and sad because of her. My parents didn’t take care about me
and just take care about my baby sister. I was really sad so I always act
foolish infront of her. I wanted her to learn to be foolish. Then, she tried to
act like me. When she acted same as my foolish acts, I was really happy. I
thought that my parents would take more care of me when my sister acting
foolish. However, nowadays I could regret myself because I’m this camp. When I
come back home after the camp, I will not act bad to her, I will teach her good
information about life or lessons. I am really sorry about
that.
Until I watched the video and write the essay, I could learned 2
things. First, think every creature is valuable even if it is a small creature.
Second, tell other people what is wrong and what is right like monk did. The
video help me to regret my last life and think for my
future.
A very well structured and focused essay! I think that your thoughts are very relevant to the given topic. I think you might need to work further on grammar. There are many 'default' errors that you make in your piece. But overall, good job!
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DeleteThis is a well-written refective essay. You shared good examples but the font color is hard to read.
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