Do you know who Joseph Kony is? He is from Uganda. He is well known as the most evil criminal in the world. Many people upload videos on many website about Joseph Kony’s crimes. However, do you think it is good way to use the video to capture Joseph Kony making him famous? I am agree with the use of the video to capture Joseph Kony by making him famous.
Before I tell why I agree with the topic, I’ll tell you more about the Joseph Kony. He commited uncountable crimes and inhumane behaviors. He has been committing crimes for more than 20 years without any restraints. He kidnapped more than 30,000 children. Moreover, he created a children’s army named LPA and forced them to kill their families. He is nominated as No.1 on International Criminal Court list. He could commit crimes because of our indifference. When you watch the video that is about “2012”, you could realize that is really serious problem. Fortunately, the director of that movie, Jason Russeu realized the problem and made it into movie. Then, more than a million people watched that video and Joseph Kony became more popular than before. People who had watched the video participated the campaign named “Kony 2012.” They demonstrated to the government that knowing about this serious problem is important and we should solve that problem. Finally USA president Barack Obama accepted that suggestion of the people. He sent the USA army to capture Kony. However he hasn’t been captured yet. Do you think it is good to make a criminal famous? Yes. I think so. This is right for the following reasons.
To start with, many people can know who is Hoseph Knoy and know his crimes. Nowdays, there are various kind of ways to share their opinion by using computers or smartphone as well as face book or twitter. When they share the video more and more, he could be more and more famous. It is a best way to let other people know who Joseph Knoy is and his other criminals. Moreover, it is the fastest way to know them about Joseph kony. If we don’t use that way to inform about Joseph Kony, we need to tell other people by using very complicated and tired methods. We need to meet them and tell about Joseph Kony one by one. It takes too much time. We can know almost everything when we watch that video “Kony 2012” instead, we don’t need to research it individually.
Moreover, we can capture Joseph Kony more easily. More than a million people saw that video. They could know the achievement of Joseph Kony and police can easily capture Joseph Kony. They could tell police the movements of the Joseph Kony.
Furthermore, we can prevent more things like this in the future. Joseph Kony could commit crimes because of our indifference. When we make criminals famous like him, we can have interested of criminals and help the children that are in danger.
Finally, we can make people interested in criminals. When people are concerned about children’s pain and Joseph Kony’s cruel acts, they could make a world where curel don’t happen.
While I saw the video and I wrote this essay, I was really surprised about Joseph Kony’s acts and I could understand what the children felt. I felt that I need to make that video with other people. I couldn’t see the video well cause the stories were too sad and made me cry. Some people will disagree with the use of the video to capture Joseph Kony by making him famous. However, I think it’s a good idea to make video and make criminal famous. First of all, it’s the fastest way to make criminal famous. Then, it’s the fastest way to know people about Joseph Kony. Moreover, we can capture Joseph Kony more easily. Furthermore, we can prevent the happens like that. Finally, we can make people interested in criminals. Because of this reasons, I think use of the video is a good way to capture Kony by making him famous.
When you click this link, you can watch the video “Kony 2012” It’s about Joseph Kony. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jPPQUISv-eM
Before I tell why I agree with the topic, I’ll tell you more about the Joseph Kony. He commited uncountable crimes and inhumane behaviors. He has been committing crimes for more than 20 years without any restraints. He kidnapped more than 30,000 children. Moreover, he created a children’s army named LPA and forced them to kill their families. He is nominated as No.1 on International Criminal Court list. He could commit crimes because of our indifference. When you watch the video that is about “2012”, you could realize that is really serious problem. Fortunately, the director of that movie, Jason Russeu realized the problem and made it into movie. Then, more than a million people watched that video and Joseph Kony became more popular than before. People who had watched the video participated the campaign named “Kony 2012.” They demonstrated to the government that knowing about this serious problem is important and we should solve that problem. Finally USA president Barack Obama accepted that suggestion of the people. He sent the USA army to capture Kony. However he hasn’t been captured yet. Do you think it is good to make a criminal famous? Yes. I think so. This is right for the following reasons.
To start with, many people can know who is Hoseph Knoy and know his crimes. Nowdays, there are various kind of ways to share their opinion by using computers or smartphone as well as face book or twitter. When they share the video more and more, he could be more and more famous. It is a best way to let other people know who Joseph Knoy is and his other criminals. Moreover, it is the fastest way to know them about Joseph kony. If we don’t use that way to inform about Joseph Kony, we need to tell other people by using very complicated and tired methods. We need to meet them and tell about Joseph Kony one by one. It takes too much time. We can know almost everything when we watch that video “Kony 2012” instead, we don’t need to research it individually.
Moreover, we can capture Joseph Kony more easily. More than a million people saw that video. They could know the achievement of Joseph Kony and police can easily capture Joseph Kony. They could tell police the movements of the Joseph Kony.
Furthermore, we can prevent more things like this in the future. Joseph Kony could commit crimes because of our indifference. When we make criminals famous like him, we can have interested of criminals and help the children that are in danger.
Finally, we can make people interested in criminals. When people are concerned about children’s pain and Joseph Kony’s cruel acts, they could make a world where curel don’t happen.
While I saw the video and I wrote this essay, I was really surprised about Joseph Kony’s acts and I could understand what the children felt. I felt that I need to make that video with other people. I couldn’t see the video well cause the stories were too sad and made me cry. Some people will disagree with the use of the video to capture Joseph Kony by making him famous. However, I think it’s a good idea to make video and make criminal famous. First of all, it’s the fastest way to make criminal famous. Then, it’s the fastest way to know people about Joseph Kony. Moreover, we can capture Joseph Kony more easily. Furthermore, we can prevent the happens like that. Finally, we can make people interested in criminals. Because of this reasons, I think use of the video is a good way to capture Kony by making him famous.
When you click this link, you can watch the video “Kony 2012” It’s about Joseph Kony. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jPPQUISv-eM
This is a good essay. You make some good points and have a good conclusion. Next time include more pictures and put spaces between the paragraphs. It is also important to spell the names correctly and get the facts right. Kony's army is LRA not ULR.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work!
Okay~I see! Thank you:)
DeleteOpps!I wil change ULR to LPA~~